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    Highland, four-holed cape
    Will hold the shivering wreck
    In the freezer aisle;
    Like on the first day of school
    You'll grow into it in time.

    A lost tuning fork.
    Last edited by Bluemauvey; 03-22-2007 at 10:08 AM.

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    Smile Syllable count! Oops!

    Mauvey, that last line needs 7...


    Vibrating twin tines
    Perfect pitch awaits the find
    Harmony is required—
    Where the slender silver forks?
    My guitar still complaining…

    Lost in the forest…
    Last edited by Pendragon; 03-23-2007 at 09:49 AM.
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pendragon View Post
    Mauvey, that last line needs 7...


    Vibrating twin tines
    Perfect pitch awaits the find
    Harmony is required—
    Where the slender silver forks?
    My guitar is still complaining…

    Lost in the forest…
    Corrected! Thanks P.

    p.s. There are 8 syllables in your last line

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    Lost in the forest
    A Roman coin that fell out
    Of time and did lay
    Face up,and brazen golden
    Day after day after day...


    The last of the clocks

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    Exclamation

    Fixed! Thank you!

    Technical tyrants!
    Now rusty and missing parts—
    Do you think to rule?
    Grandfather hath no pendulum,
    Big Ben hath lost his great voice…


    The end of the computer age….
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Drive a hard bargain
    Pull the plug on memory
    And ram the point home
    There will be no restore point
    When we format who we are


    A flipped coin
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    Exclamation

    Possibilities—
    Many reason there but two:
    Heads or tails only—
    I submit further results:
    What chance if I call edge?


    an outright lie told when the truth is perfectly acceptable...
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Exclamation

    White Man has forked tongue—
    Telling my People promises;
    Whites never keep them.
    My People are not Children—
    If you lie to them, they know…



    Getting out of prison after 25 years...
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Cool Getting out of Prison after 25 Years...

    I was never an
    upright Person, until I
    left my unholy
    prison, with its sick people;
    25 years of Madness.


    ------------------------------
    The Time Has Come.
    Last edited by Uncle Lar; 04-06-2007 at 02:26 PM. Reason: Change the second and last lines.

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    Exclamation

    Warden says "It is time."
    I take one last look around.
    Today is the day.
    Sentence handed down carried out.
    Innocent man like me dies...


    The Last Leaf
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    The Last Leaf

    Burnished gold clings to
    the edge of Autumn, leafy
    fingers plucked and crushed
    by winter's brute tug and stomp...
    Cares not for gold, but diamonds.


    the perfect apple
    "Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."

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    Cool

    The perfect apple
    with high knowledge was given
    to Adam and Eve
    with dire consequences
    for them and all their children.


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    A Better Tomorrow.

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    Exclamation

    Ah, Uncle Lar beat me to the punch! I like the tanka, so I'll leave my version anyway. Now, let us see:

    Burnished crimson shine,
    Temptation for poor mortals,
    Only one small bite—
    Deliciously wicked taste—
    Cast out of Eden, forever…


    Looking for a better life—
    Where does one go when dreams fade?
    Beyond tomorrow's sky,
    In places that never saw me—
    Is there still room for my dreams?



    self-portrait
    Last edited by Pendragon; 04-09-2007 at 10:19 AM.
    Some of us laugh
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    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Cool

    With my Self-Portrait,
    I see myself as I am,
    accept myself well,
    and seek to improve myself
    wisely and deftly always.


    -----------------------------
    My Bleeding Heart

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    Cool My Bleeding Heart.

    My heart gushed out blood
    when she left me after she
    learned her Father would
    disown her if he found out
    she dated me and loved me.


    -----------------------------------

    A Happy Tale

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