Immersed in silence,
The night glow is luminous;
Alone, I see the stars.
Immersed in silence,
The night glow is luminous;
Alone, I see the stars.
"It's so mysterious, the land of tears."
Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
Alone I see the stars
Beneath Mark Antony's soul.
Drink wine and love women.
LET THERE BE LIGHT
"Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena
My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/
Immersed in silence
I feel emptiness within
engulfed forever
engulfed forever
but you better get loud quick
because we all are
(ejarg, hope you have a great time on the forums; you're supposed to continue from the last line of the post above and mantain the syllable(I suck at spelling?) rule.)
Last edited by Adolescent09; 03-27-2007 at 10:56 PM.
My hide hides the heart inside
Because we all are,
We all can become as not;
Death tolls the last bell.
Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
Death tolls the last bell -
the saved ran away from the
solomn overcast
Oops! My bad ... I was at the wrong page, and I saw Bebbin's post as the last one ...Originally Posted by Adolescent09
I will try to fix with some of your lines; start with Virgil's last line -
Drink wine and love women.
I feel emptiness within,
engulfed forever.
Last two line are by Ejarg, Hey, E, you did not know you felt that way about women, did you?
Now the rest of the Haiku's work anyway. I will use the very first line in my new Haiku.
Last edited by Janine; 03-28-2007 at 02:13 AM.
Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
Adol, no problem - I fixed it to keep flowing along after yours.
Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
Because we all are,
We all can become as not;
Death tolls the last bell.
Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
ktd, here is the next in line - sorry I had to move you to have it all fall in place.
Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
Solomn overcast
Clouds with stale vaporous fumes,
Poison existence.
Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
poison existence
subvert the heart of being
her room is empty
se non e vero, e molto ben'trovato
Her room is empty
Anguish, loneliness, sorrow
Like a lover lost
Like a lover lost
Solitude is all she feels
Her heart is empty
Janine, thanks for making it right again. Sorry guys for the confusion ... my bad
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