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    Requiem

    He looks as if he were only sleeping…
    The peace upon his face
    Belies the violence that ripped asunder
    The Spirit and The Flesh
    In one blast of scorched air and smoke.

    The irony of it all
    Is that he never was a decadent wastrel—
    No eccentric rich man—
    He might have had a hundred dollars,
    Never more than that on him at one time.

    A simple soul just searching—
    Praying, crying sometimes, and desperately hoping
    For someone that would return his love—
    That could see the man behind masks he wore
    To shield himself from people’s misunderstanding cruelty.

    They tell me a phone call came last evening,
    That got him all emotional and exited;
    And he was dressed up best as he could be—
    Waiting with anticipation
    As the clock ticked down the final minutes.

    I wonder how his face lit up,
    How he rushed about with final preparations
    When he finally heard the knocking:
    But I have to sign the guest book at the viewing
    Just because poor old Archie answered his door…

    Pendragon
    © 3/16/07
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    The Waters of Shiloah

    Water pounds against
    my weary shoulders.
    It churns around my ankles
    I curl around my core,
    and witness only
    the blinding sun and
    my own blinding pain.

    Oh dear Father!
    My pleas fall on deaf ears.
    I am nothing,
    I am less than the dust
    of the earth, for at least
    dirt, mud and filth obey Thee.
    I do not.

    "The Lord gave
    the Lord hath taken away,
    blessed be the name of the Lord."
    One by one they disappeared:
    health
    love
    pride
    talent.
    I am left, dry, unable to rise
    or move forward.

    So I lie here, buoyed
    by the rushing water.
    Begging Thee to take me back,
    Give me
    one more chance.
    to walk
    run
    sing
    leap
    in joy.
    The waters of Shiloah,
    they come softly.

    Peace envelops me. I am
    nothing, I know this.
    But in Him, I am everything.


    --I quote Job 1:21
    Lost in silence.

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    I'm glad I stumlbed upon this forum

    A few weeks ago, I submitted a poem to poetry.com, with an iota of hope that I could atleast win an Ipod or some nonsense like that, if not a $1,000 cash prize. Yesterday I received a letter from those damn hucksters, and quickly realized that the International Library of Poetry was most certainly a disreputable scam organization, so went about doing some googling on the matter, and, luckily, came across a thread on this website containing details on all sorts of disappointing encounters with poetry.com. Anyhow, this is my first, and only, attempt at poetry...

    Nothing can satisfy this urge
    So I stay in a cloud
    My heart is in a constant surge
    My mind is far too loud
    Oh, how I yearn to change the past
    Hoping to move forward
    Assuming not everything lasts
    And things will move toward
    An Eden to provide solace
    Nothing else could provide
    If only it could be just us
    Last edited by mcgillert; 03-16-2007 at 08:07 PM. Reason: Why didn't my signature show up?

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    poetry.com is a scam site... go to the sticky topic in this poem category. Even if it wasn't a sham there is little chance that you, I or any other "normal" poet could compare to some of the extraordinary stuff on that site.

    Interesting poem though. Good job.
    My hide hides the heart inside

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    Quote Originally Posted by Adolescent09 View Post
    poetry.com is a scam site... go to the sticky topic in this poem category. Even if it wasn't a sham there is little chance that you, I or any other "normal" poet could compare to some of the extraordinary stuff on that site.

    Interesting poem though. Good job.
    Right on, thanks man. I wish I had know about this website months ago.


    Leaving yourself to kill your grief
    Rooms can be lonely, but that don't mean
    I want a son who can float and fly
    I'll take a daughter who laughs and cries

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    Quote Originally Posted by seasong View Post
    The Waters of Shiloah



    "The Lord gave
    the Lord hath taken away,
    blessed be the name of the Lord."
    One by one they disappeared:
    health
    love
    pride
    talent.
    I am left, dry, unable to rise
    or move forward.

    So I lie here, buoyed
    by the rushing water.
    Begging Thee to take me back,
    Give me
    one more chance.
    to walk
    run
    sing
    leap
    in joy.
    The waters of Shiloah,
    they come softly.

    Peace envelops me. I am
    nothing, I know this.
    But in Him, I am everything.


    --I quote Job 1:21
    Love the poem, Seasong. Totally relate to these verses.

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    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Allegory

    Weakness seeking,
    Ravenous wolves prowl—
    Circling vultures hunting endlessly—
    Show fear, you die quickly.
    Thoughts become words become deeds.
    Ignorance breeds prejudice breeds hate.
    Pass and see me not time following time.
    Your loss it is. Sing sorrow.
    Mine was it never; neither gain nor loss…

    Loss nor gain: Neither! Never was it mine!
    Sorrow sing, your loss it is.
    Time following time not see me and pass…
    Hate breeds prejudice breeds ignorance!
    Deeds become words become thoughts!
    Quickly you die, fear show…
    Endless hunting vultures circling!
    Prowl, wolves, ravenous—
    Seeking weakness…

    Pendragon
    © 3/17/2007 10:13 PM
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Would someone comment please?
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Cool How I must wonder

    I turn back the tables and close my eyes

    The tears weld up and fall

    How could this be?

    How did this happen?

    I wonder these questions

    Did I do something wrong?

    You had said I hadn't

    But I still do wonder

    I look out the window and think

    The clouds are dark and gathering

    The storm will soon be upon my house

    Soon the sky will be crying

    It will join me in my frustration

    It will join me in my pain

    My tears are not for nothing

    I must put them away

    I must put it aside

    I must not think of it

    It will be gone

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    Pendragon, That's a good poem, I really like it, you can almost feel the fear from the hunt when you read it.

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    Thanks for the comments, Kitten. I am afraid you missed the point of the poem, but many find these perfect reversibles hard to read. The idea is to get two differing views as the words reverse.

    I like your lovely sad poem. Tears are never meaningless but I am intrigued by these lines:


    I must put them away

    I must put it aside

    I must not think of it

    It will be gone


    Do you really think burying sorrow inside makes it vanish? Or will it just pop back up like the undead?

    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    I don't think that buring it will make it go away but I know there are many people out there that do think that. Thanks very much about my poem.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pendragon View Post
    Would someone comment please?
    I'll comment Pendragon! I love your poems. They are full of Emotion. Its like a struggle. I especially like the new poem you have put as your signature. It makes me feel sad, at a loss. Has something happened Pendragon?
    Quote Originally Posted by Pendragon View Post
    Thanks for the comments, Kitten. I am afraid you missed the point of the poem, but many find these perfect reversibles hard to read. The idea is to get two differing views as the words reverse.

    I like your lovely sad poem. Tears are never meaningless but I am intrigued by these lines:


    I must put them away

    I must put it aside

    I must not think of it

    It will be gone


    Do you really think burying sorrow inside makes it vanish? Or will it just pop back up like the undead?

    No i dont think its good to bottle it up inside. Scream, Shout, just let it all out!
    "Come away O human child!To the waters of the wild, With a faery hand in hand, For the worlds more full of weeping than you can understand."
    W.B.Yeats

    "If it looks like a Dwarf and smells like a Dwarf, then it's probably a Dwarf (or a latrine wearing dungarees)"
    Artemins Fowl and the Lost Colony by Eoin Colfer


    my poems-please comment Forum Rules

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    Prayer

    The clouds are still dark
    The rain still coming down
    Lightning hurting my eyes
    Thunder grumbling off in the mountains…
    I was hoping for a rainbow
    But the coward sun hides
    The wet little falling prisms
    Can’t reflect the whole spectrum…
    There is just a mind-hurting glare
    Of electric white light
    I’ve never quite been that far down—
    Don’t require electroshock therapy…
    Just take the darkness away
    Blue is such a soothing color
    Can’t you just touch up the clouds in pink?
    Paint a sunset for me?
    Oh, Father, please…

    Pendragon
    © Sunday, March 25, 2007
    Last edited by Pendragon; 03-26-2007 at 09:53 AM. Reason: Line change
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Dear Pendradon: Usually poetry is not something I would presume to edit but just one expression in this quite good piece needed a little tweaking (in my humble opinion) would have written..."the coward sun...". Small adjustment but then "Brevity is the soul of wit". RJS

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