Sailing to Eden
destroying humanity
the pirates succeeds.
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alright. that was bad anyway, hihi.
Sailing to Eden
destroying humanity
the pirates succeeds.
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alright. that was bad anyway, hihi.
Originally Posted by Reccura
That was hilarious...just because of the combination of Eden, and humanity, and pirates...at least I hoped you meant it to be funny.
I'm the worst poet there is!
Well, at least it made someone laugh, hahark. You're right: Eden, pirates, humanity... it doesn't mix.
No! It was a great haiku! Too many haikus expressing sad thoughts...your haiku was a delightful twist
Aw, thank you, ktd!
heres another one that might made you laugh then,
The pirates succeeds
they chased rainbows with guitars
their breaths smellled seaweeds.
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Are you encouraging me to make "haha" worthy haikus?
Their breaths smellled seaweeds,
They cometh from the water,
Death through'out the air' ,
Death throughout the air,
Silent lands and snow-capped hearts
Nothing more can grow
Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain
The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau
The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin
The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy
Nothing more can grow
The tumour is now removed
Happy tears, leaves fall
Happy tears, leaves fall,
Down the trail lies my waterfall—
I call “Rivendell”…
Last edited by Pendragon; 03-12-2007 at 10:46 AM.
Some of us laugh
Some of us cry
Some of us smoke
Some of us lie
But it's all just the way
that we cope with our lives...
I call "Rivendell"
Came upon Elrond the elf
Who remade the sword
"When one door of happiness closes, another opens; but often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one which has been opened for us." --*Helen Keller*
Who remade the sword
The remaker of the words
Plays with fire, recasts
Plays with fire, recasts
Roles, after company hurt
In the inferno
Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain
The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau
The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin
The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy
in the inferno
at least was virgil to guide
here virtually none
se non e vero, e molto ben'trovato
gee, thanks!
you could have kept your haiku going, but thanks for using mine, because i really liked the name of your yacht!
shh!!!
the air and water have been here a long time, and they are telling stories.
here virtually none
souls there in for the harvest
elsewhere one should go
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