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    thanks admin, i will truly keep that in mind.

    fiestarter,

    p.s- have you written any poetry your self?
    shut up and listen!*!

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    yes

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    why not share some,
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    I haven't actually wrote for 2 or 3 years, this stuff is all old.

    http://www.online-literature.com/poetry/

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    Good job on those poems admin.
    You have alot of talent. 8)
    Stupidity is Bliss...

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    Thanks, some of them I really like, others... not so much. Some of that stuff I wrote when I was as young as 12 or 13 and I think its kinda corny.

    My personal favorites are "The Wideness of the World" "Goodbye Kisses" "The Dark Room" "Wither" and I'm fond of a couple of my sonnets.

    I split this topic off from the other one because it was on a different subject.

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    oic, i wasnt sure, i was like i dont remember postin this, lol
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    lmao
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    There is some very nice poetry between that, Admin.

    ps.

    When someone calls himself Admin - a quite anonimous, abstract and object-like name - he doesn't make me think that I'm dealing with a poet. But no wonder: you haven't wrote for three years, you say. Shame on you: you surely do have talent.

    I think there are some publishers out there waiting for you.

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    wow admin! they are great! what strikes me of your poems is that they are so SIMPLE! i think it's a great goal, to write in such a simple way, but yet meaningful, deep... things are often deep but complicated...or so simple that they have no real meaning... But yours are both simple and deep...i'm not sure i actullay expressed what i want to say but...well 'simple' is the key word



    (5 minutes later...) Oh my God! "She was beautiful". It's incredible...it's so sweet... it's great great great....great...
    dead on the inside, i've got nothing to prove
    keep me alive and give me something to lose

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