"In rime sparse il suono/ di quei sospiri ond' io nudriva 'l core/ in sul mio primo giovenile errore"~ Francesco Petrarca
"Follies and nonsense, whims and inconsistencies do divert me, I own, and I laugh at them whenever I can."~ Jane Austen
Oh good. I have time. I wrote one, but I wanted to give it a little time to digest.
LET THERE BE LIGHT
"Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena
My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/
ok. thanks Petrarch
The~Female~Mind
In Memory of my father
Michael A. Botten
02/18/1975 - 01/09/2007
can we post more than one? or is that a fairly arrogant and intrusive concept?
I agree. One submission per person. If you wish to substitute for the one you submitted, either you can edit that previous post by deleting the first and replacing it with the second. Or you can tell Petrarch which one you want in.
Sorry Triskele, but it will get too confusing otherwise. But if everyone else agrees, then what can I say.
LET THERE BE LIGHT
"Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena
My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/
To second the above posts, only one poem per person can be judged. It's fine if you're inspired to post two poems, but only one can be considered for the competition. If you do post two, please clearly mark the one you want considered for contest purposes versus the one that's just for fun.![]()
"In rime sparse il suono/ di quei sospiri ond' io nudriva 'l core/ in sul mio primo giovenile errore"~ Francesco Petrarca
"Follies and nonsense, whims and inconsistencies do divert me, I own, and I laugh at them whenever I can."~ Jane Austen
Besides, the person judging has enough to do deciding on a winning poem and commenting on each entry with only ONE per person!And Petra has only given herself two days to do all of that! Take pity on her!
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Some of us laugh
Some of us cry
Some of us smoke
Some of us lie
But it's all just the way
that we cope with our lives...
OK, here's my entry to this one.
The Point of Hinge
The pages pivot across,
While words animate to a conclusion,
A maelstrom of logic inveigles the reader.
We can parse all we want,
But the pages still pivot.
Is it logic we seek?
Is it logic that connects the soul with life,
The life that breathes the pine smell
Of trees that will be ground to pages?
Every pivot has a point of hinge.
The pages pivot but the pine trees
Sway to the artic gust beneath the cloudy sky.
Upon a crusty branch,
A cerulean warbler finagles the earth.
LET THERE BE LIGHT
"Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena
My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/
Wow! This is the most entries I've seen for a poetry contest.
Yeah, this thread is really warming up for this contest.I've just been reading through some of the entries - these are all amazing! I love everyone's poems; great job, all!
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No day but today
-God is real, unless proclaimed integer-
Thanks Pen. This contest is shaping up to be especially challenging to the judge since, as ktd and mir point out, there are quite a number of entries. Since they're all such good entries, though, it makes it an exceptionally pleasant challenge.
Besides, I'll just have finished grading a big stack of student papers that weekend, so I'll be in top form for meting out judgment.
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"In rime sparse il suono/ di quei sospiri ond' io nudriva 'l core/ in sul mio primo giovenile errore"~ Francesco Petrarca
"Follies and nonsense, whims and inconsistencies do divert me, I own, and I laugh at them whenever I can."~ Jane Austen