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  1. 01-22-2007, 11:32 PM #1
    Rogers_68
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    a wedding story

    any thoughts would be much appreciated. thanks in advance!
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  2. 01-24-2007, 12:07 PM #2
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    would anyone mind critiquing this? i hope to give it to a friend of mine, of who's wedding it is loosely based on. i'd love some "constructive criticism."

    thanks.
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