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    trees dress
    bright silk colors
    red, yellow, purple, gold
    Did Jackie Frost go by?
    Magic...
    Last edited by Pendragon; 12-27-2006 at 01:52 AM.
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Magic
    Fire worshippers
    Seek good deeds, good thoughts, good
    Actions, to make a house of songs,
    Asha.
    Voices mysterious far and near,
    Sound of the wind and sound of the sea,
    Are calling and whispering in my ear,
    Whifflingpin! Why stayest thou here?

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    asha
    or ash, you pick
    perhaps it is mere dust
    motes, that carry a train of thought
    to dirt

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    to dirt
    we must return
    from which we were formed
    ashes to ashes, dust to dust—
    forever
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    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Uh...problems here....From where do I take it?
    "You have enemies? Good. That means you’ve stood up for something, sometime in your life."


    To go wrong in one's own way is better than to go right in someone else's" - Dostoevksy

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    eternity awaiting us...
    yet nobody
    dares wait in this black place
    chanting in tongues of pale wing angels
    heaven

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    Quote Originally Posted by Laindessiel View Post
    Uh...problems here....From where do I take it?
    to dirt
    we must return
    from which we were formed
    ashes to ashes, dust to dust—
    Eternity awaiting for us...

    What'd I do?
    Heaven,
    Land of eternal golden day
    Streets of pure gold
    Angel choir singing
    Joyous music
    Some of us laugh
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    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pendragon View Post
    Heaven,
    Land of eternal golden day
    Streets of pure gold
    Angel choir singing
    Joyous music
    it's supposed to be in
    2
    4
    6
    8
    2 format

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    Quote Originally Posted by x894565256 View Post
    it's supposed to be in
    2
    4
    6
    8
    2 format
    Thank you. I was going on words, not syllables. A different form, I suppose. That can be jumbled any way, but you have to have say, one word, two, three, four, five-- if you start then at three words, you'd go 3, 4, 5, 2, 1 and so on. My bad, two different forms. Let me fix this poem.

    Heaven,
    Sweet Forever
    Streets of purest gold
    Angelic choir singing softly
    Joyous

    I think I counted right!
    Some of us laugh
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    Success Uncle Pen!

    Joyous
    Melancholy
    Of the heavens' trumpets
    Swing and slide 'gether, back and forth.
    Holy.
    "You have enemies? Good. That means you’ve stood up for something, sometime in your life."


    To go wrong in one's own way is better than to go right in someone else's" - Dostoevksy

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    Sitting apart
    From life's hugger-mugger
    In calm contemplation of the
    Navel.
    Voices mysterious far and near,
    Sound of the wind and sound of the sea,
    Are calling and whispering in my ear,
    Whifflingpin! Why stayest thou here?

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    Navel
    oranges drip
    sweetness and bitterness
    philosophy in a thick rind
    cast off
    "Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."

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    to dirt
    I am to go
    whether restless somber
    doubting hoping faithful I die
    alone

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    how's that???
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    Um, nevermind . . .
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    Exclamation

    alone
    no one beside
    me as I travel the path
    hurting my feet on sharp little rocks—
    painful
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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