Yes, but I think we better keep what was in them private.Originally Posted by Janine
gee, was that girl me? LOL
I will write a poem in a second, What did you think of the email reponses - were you happy with them or do you have other ideas for the Sh thread?
LET THERE BE LIGHT
"Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena
My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/
she was still lovely
as the breeze kissed her pale cheeks
and leaves circled 'round
The~Female~Mind
In Memory of my father
Michael A. Botten
02/18/1975 - 01/09/2007
Hey Uncle Virg, good evening! I like your haikus a lot! Giving a sort of different mood to each line makes it intersting. My thoughts travel far and wide and it is inspired!
Dang! There are lots of good Haiku'ers in this forum.::
And leaves circle 'round
The dark misty place haunts me
Like a horror film.
"You have enemies? Good. That means you’ve stood up for something, sometime in your life."
To go wrong in one's own way is better than to go right in someone else's" - Dostoevksy
Like a horror film
The lights flicker on many faces
Fear decends upon the crowd
Lain, what i try to do and it sometimes works and sometimes not is continue the sentence from the first line, but take it in a different direction than expected; then twist it again with the third line in a summary way but not obvious.Hey Uncle Virg, good evening! I like your haikus a lot! Giving a sort of different mood to each line makes it intersting. My thoughts travel far and wide and it is inspired!
LET THERE BE LIGHT
"Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena
My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/
Yes, I am lovely - haha
Fear descends on the crowd
like fog upon a grass field.
He has a rifle.
LET THERE BE LIGHT
"Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena
My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/
I'm sure you are.Yes, I am lovely - haha
LET THERE BE LIGHT
"Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena
My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/
That is right, Virgil, you are a pretty twisted person! LOL - sorry just getting tired, really it was cool advice. Hi L, how are you tonight?
He has a rifle
Hot metal in his tense grip
His heart left behind
It works for me everytime!
He has a rifle.
And it went Bang! bang! bang! Bang!
All the people: Dead
"You have enemies? Good. That means you’ve stood up for something, sometime in your life."
To go wrong in one's own way is better than to go right in someone else's" - Dostoevksy
All the people: Dead
They dont matter anyway
Useless stupid lives
Last edited by kilted exile; 11-30-2006 at 12:03 AM. Reason: posted at same time
There once was a scotsman named Drew
Who put too much wine in his stew
He felt a bit drunk
And fell off his bunk
And landed smack into his shoe ~(C) Ms Niamh Anne King
I like yours better L...we must have posted same time! Now what?
Nice. That wasn't easy.
His heart left behind
for the girl who waved hi.
Short sandy hair curled.
LET THERE BE LIGHT
"Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena
My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/
now we have three - with same first line...everyone liked that rifle thingie!
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