okay, another fan club. that's great. PL. (btw-how's that poem coming along?)
okay, another fan club. that's great. PL. (btw-how's that poem coming along?)
"Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."
narcissus once drowned
age curbing emolients
embodied his ruin
"Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."
Great h, love the stair reference - terrific! I liked yours too Riesa - very much - the one before this post, with my closing line starting yours. Wonderful!Originally Posted by Riesa
I think another fanclub is in order.
that's so dignified and dark, love it.
I changed my second line in that h - I counted, too, but math is not my strong point.I will get it right soon, the poem sounded better before, I think, but was not correct form...dern it...
embodied his ruin
the beach to the stranded whale
surf to sand prison
surf to sand prison
starts one's hike up Everest.
Must trek to thin air.
LET THERE BE LIGHT
"Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena
My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/
Must trek to thin air
Boots weighted by snow and pain
The summit is clear!
Last edited by Janine; 11-28-2006 at 11:35 PM. Reason: changed second line slightly - one word
Il Penseroso has a way of dignifying my mediocre haiku..I think another fanclub is in order.
Dreams! adorations! illuminations! religions!
the whole boatload of sensitive!
— Allen Ginsberg, Howl II.
Love this site - it is so much fun! But I have to go for the night. I am fading away....See all tomorrow! J
Good night, Janine! May choirs of poetic rock angles sing thee to sleep...
Dreams! adorations! illuminations! religions!
the whole boatload of sensitive
— Allen Ginsberg, Howl II.
the summit is clear
White rain slash thy wasting skin
And I say-Goodbye
Dreams! adorations! illuminations! religions!
the whole boatload of sensitive
— Allen Ginsberg, Howl II.
lol lol lol lol ~Good night, Janine! May choirs of poetic rock angles sing thee to sleep...
And I say-Goodbye
To all my tired confusions
Soon time will be day
Soon time will be day
Clammy digits tug the chord
Flat ECG line
I declare after all there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of anything than of a book! When I have a house of my own, I shall be miserable if I have not an excellent library.
Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
Flat ECG line
cold sings morbid lullabys
It's not bad at all
A man should never be ashamed to own he has been in the wrong, which is but saying in other words that he is wise today than yesterday - Alexander Pope
Conviction that is not under-girded by LOVE makes the possessor of that conviction obnoxious and the dogma possessed becomes repulsive - Ravi Zacharias.
It's not bad at all
the passing years will show us
how to laugh again
"Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."
It's not bad at all
Now I found your pretty face
I want to hold you...
Hiya Oz!
Dreams! adorations! illuminations! religions!
the whole boatload of sensitive
— Allen Ginsberg, Howl II.
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