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    just nudging the thread a bit... Bong? You there?

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    Hatred dwells in life lost with shattered sanity
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    Fissures
    Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain

    The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau

    The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin

    The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy

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    Hatred dwells in life lost with shattered sanity
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    I have a plan: attack!

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    Hatred dwells in life lost with shattered sanity
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    Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain

    The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau

    The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin

    The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy

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    Hatred dwells in life lost with shattered sanity
    When only love lights your shadow cast across
    Fissures criss-crossed latticework.
    Receding
    “As Kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame . . .”


    Why disqualify the rush? I'm tabled. I'm tabled.



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    Hatred dwells in life lost with shattered sanity
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    Receding beneath
    A man should never be ashamed to own he has been in the wrong, which is but saying in other words that he is wise today than yesterday - Alexander Pope

    Conviction that is not under-girded by LOVE makes the possessor of that conviction obnoxious and the dogma possessed becomes repulsive - Ravi Zacharias.

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    please can we keep this going, it would be great to see what we come up with.

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    A man should never be ashamed to own he has been in the wrong, which is but saying in other words that he is wise today than yesterday - Alexander Pope

    Conviction that is not under-girded by LOVE makes the possessor of that conviction obnoxious and the dogma possessed becomes repulsive - Ravi Zacharias.

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    Hope you all don’t mind.

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    Receding beneath their
    the silent bear no witness against themselves.
    ~huxley~

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    Hatred dwells in life lost with shattered sanity
    When only love lights your shadow cast across
    Fissures criss-crossed latticework.
    Receding beneath their hastily
    “As Kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame . . .”


    Why disqualify the rush? I'm tabled. I'm tabled.



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    Hatred dwells in life lost with shattered sanity
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    Fissures criss-crossed latticework.
    Receding beneath their hastily garlanded
    A man should never be ashamed to own he has been in the wrong, which is but saying in other words that he is wise today than yesterday - Alexander Pope

    Conviction that is not under-girded by LOVE makes the possessor of that conviction obnoxious and the dogma possessed becomes repulsive - Ravi Zacharias.

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    Hatred dwells in life lost with shattered sanity
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    Fissures criss-crossed latticework.
    Receding beneath their hastily garlanded vines

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    Hatred dwells in life lost with shattered sanity
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    Entwined

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