Neither. Boxed mac-n-cheese, with hot sauce.
Sunbeam captured dust
sinks and rises by currents
touched only by air.
Neither. Boxed mac-n-cheese, with hot sauce.
Sunbeam captured dust
sinks and rises by currents
touched only by air.
ick.I had a gardenburger with jalapenos.
touched only by air
the boy in his bubble
reflects in silence
"Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."
I'm in college, so I make do with lots of cheap grosseries.
Reflects in silence
the rugged star of westerns,
all hands with a gun.
My favorite college food was top ramen with tuna and an egg, saturated with Rooster chili-garlic sauce. I've had my share of gross groceries.
all hands with a gun
the wicked wind's a blowin
meet sundown at Ike's.
"Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."
That doesn't sound so gross.
Meet sundown at Ike's
the dropping day fills each bowl
with mystery chow.
That was really really good, congrats!! Im becoming a big fan of your haikusOriginally Posted by Il Penseroso
With mystery chow
Cerebral cows graze roughly
Teeth ache from thinking
I declare after all there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of anything than of a book! When I have a house of my own, I shall be miserable if I have not an excellent library.
Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
Gee, quite a modification....
Glad I am not as overly sensitive about my lame attempt to write, as I am about my artwork.
I'd call that a total rewrite!
Virgil, how many syllables should it have? I can rewrite it. I don't really know the technical rules of H. It was really from a longer poem I wrote - modified it quickly for this post.
my new lame attempt:
Silence screams within me
Your ears deafened by the sound
Pages close forever.
beyond then and here
now gone to distance near
far beyond imaginings
this is fun but think I am pretty bad at it!
you skipped my haiku, its a continuation. but im glad youre getting the hang of it!
here, ill repost mine
With mystery chow
Cerebral cows graze roughly
Teeth ache from thinking
oh and haiku rules go
5 syllables
7
then 5 again
and in this forum you begin with the last persons line
like with mine your first line will be Teeth ache from thinking
and the next person will start with your last line
Feel free to ask questions if youre still confused! And welcome!
Last edited by dramasnot6; 11-27-2006 at 04:42 AM.
I declare after all there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of anything than of a book! When I have a house of my own, I shall be miserable if I have not an excellent library.
Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
Teeth ache from thinking
Back ache from loving to hard
Euphoric welts show
heya Janine, no worries Haiku took me a while to learn as well. You'll soon get the hang of it.
Don't forget the 5, 7, 5 syllabels
A man should never be ashamed to own he has been in the wrong, which is but saying in other words that he is wise today than yesterday - Alexander Pope
Conviction that is not under-girded by LOVE makes the possessor of that conviction obnoxious and the dogma possessed becomes repulsive - Ravi Zacharias.
Euphoric welts show
I will wait here Like A Stone
Blind dreaming turned snow
Dreams! adorations! illuminations! religions!
the whole boatload of sensitive!
— Allen Ginsberg, Howl II.
Blind dreaming turned snow
Flecks of cream dot hooded lids
Waking and melting
I declare after all there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of anything than of a book! When I have a house of my own, I shall be miserable if I have not an excellent library.
Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
Posting Permissions
Reply With Quote
