Originally Posted by Den
Take my soul there
Into a realm of quiet and
unremitted peace.
Take my soul there
Into a realm of quiet and
unremitted peace.
“As Kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame . . .”
Why disqualify the rush? I'm tabled. I'm tabled.
You still must get your self sick, Doc...the last line is now composed of lesser than 10 but lesser than 5!!! Now how's that? Can I prescribe you something?
Laindessiel wrote;
Mr. Eep, you last line is composed of 10 syllables! It's a Haiku, Doctor...I can't follow that...
Oops - OH Gawd - I stuffed up!!
After doing some hasty reminding of the use of syllables, is this better?
In the vein of love
move swift and free
take my soul there
Geez - I hope so
I want to get you all better! You are such a very moving poet!! I read your poems in your thread and it moved me heaven and earth!
"You have enemies? Good. That means you’ve stood up for something, sometime in your life."
To go wrong in one's own way is better than to go right in someone else's" - Dostoevksy
Shoutgrace, same goes for you, dear....
Take my soul there
Into a realm of quiet and
unremitted peace.
"You have enemies? Good. That means you’ve stood up for something, sometime in your life."
To go wrong in one's own way is better than to go right in someone else's" - Dostoevksy
Unremmitted peace
No break from constant warfare
Into the bunker
There once was a scotsman named Drew
Who put too much wine in his stew
He felt a bit drunk
And fell off his bunk
And landed smack into his shoe ~(C) Ms Niamh Anne King
Into the bunker
Crime and love still lay asleep.
Wish they would not wake.
"You have enemies? Good. That means you’ve stood up for something, sometime in your life."
To go wrong in one's own way is better than to go right in someone else's" - Dostoevksy
Wish they would not wake
But somehow they always do
Lets kill Prince Charming
There once was a scotsman named Drew
Who put too much wine in his stew
He felt a bit drunk
And fell off his bunk
And landed smack into his shoe ~(C) Ms Niamh Anne King
Let's kill Prince Charmong
Not yet, said Charming Princess
"I will kiss him first"
"You have enemies? Good. That means you’ve stood up for something, sometime in your life."
To go wrong in one's own way is better than to go right in someone else's" - Dostoevksy
I will kiss him first,
before I recede into
mist and nothingness
"Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."
mist and nothingness
its what i feel inside me
im a slowly dying leaf
The~Female~Mind
In Memory of my father
Michael A. Botten
02/18/1975 - 01/09/2007
In slowly dying leaf
I sing lullabies to thee...
So long and goodnight...
Dreams! adorations! illuminations! religions!
the whole boatload of sensitive!
— Allen Ginsberg, Howl II.
This Haiku man....
How many syllables in the word 'Hari Kiri' - cos that's what I'm going to commit if I can't get this right.
4 right??? PLease tell me I'm right????
AS for the game;
Ahem...
So long and goodnight
my ego is blasted bare
come hari kiri
Hi Dr Eep!!! You are right, .. Don't worry...
Anyway...
Come hari kiri,
thy sins have aged in teardrops
hand me the dagger...
--
was that good?
Dreams! adorations! illuminations! religions!
the whole boatload of sensitive
— Allen Ginsberg, Howl II.
It was good for me.
Hand me the dagger
Remember how I told you
She would pay some day?
“As Kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame . . .”
Why disqualify the rush? I'm tabled. I'm tabled.
She would pay some day,
She had always promised to
Loan still unpaid
There once was a scotsman named Drew
Who put too much wine in his stew
He felt a bit drunk
And fell off his bunk
And landed smack into his shoe ~(C) Ms Niamh Anne King
Loan IS still unpaid (Kilt, you only composed a line of 4 syllables)
Trudges on her dampened heart
And moist conscience too
"You have enemies? Good. That means you’ve stood up for something, sometime in your life."
To go wrong in one's own way is better than to go right in someone else's" - Dostoevksy
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