what's the haiku format again?????
what's the haiku format again?????
Hope its clear now....Originally Posted by ;7807
Ok, so, I write a haiku, then the next poster uses the last line of myhaiku... k?
Haiku:
1. A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.
2. A poem written in this form.
what will you become
anything you want to be
Truth in time will tell
“Metamorphosis, I don’t understand”.
In these realms of Voracious Desires,
a Gregor Samsa asks another...
http://orange-reason.blogspot.com
Metamorphosis,I dont understand.
In these realms of Voracious Desires,
A Gregor Samsa asks another...
“Metamorphosis, I don’t understand”.
In these realms of Voracious Desires,
a Gregor Samsa asks another...
http://orange-reason.blogspot.com
((What happened to 5-7-5?))
A Gregor Samsa
Is a kind of beverage
A taste of apple
Por una cabeza
Si ella me olvida
Qué importa perderme
Mil veces la vida
Para qué vivir
A taste of apple
reminds me of my two front
teeth...oh agony!
i like i like i like!
(ok so it's not a haiku... but had to comment)
an apple a day
is great; but a pineapple
rots my teeth away!
Mo, the first line of your haiku has to lead off with the last line of the previous poster's haiku.
rots my teeth away
sunsets sweet smile opens eye
eternal compost
eternal compost
decomposing, nourishing.
the circle of life
"Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."
the circle of life
sometimes doesn't reach its tail.
Then the sun goes dark.
LET THERE BE LIGHT
"Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena
My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/
then the sun goes dark
as the last humans watch through
embedded eye-pods.
have fun with that one, next person.
"Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."
Embedded eye-pods
Floating about in blue slime
Very odd Sci-fi.
Por una cabeza
Si ella me olvida
Qué importa perderme
Mil veces la vida
Para qué vivir
very odd sci-fi
is what he likes most of all
he is a strange man
he is a strange man.
but i think daily of him,
awake from heartache...
the only thing to fear is fear its self...but why not fear the living?
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