Very nice, Fitz. I think it's a marvelous poem. I have never heard of Baxter, or any New Zealand poet for that matter. Is there a translation to the foreign language lines, which I assume are in Maaori? They are centered at the heart of the poem and I gather are central.


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The line is the Maaori rendition of the English line which follows: The sun which is godlike.
Why don't you write books people can read? -Nora Barnacle


