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    Greetings and a little question about rhythm

    Well, hello to everyone. I've found this forum while looking for information for an essay in Emily Dickinson, and all I can say is that it's really interesting. I would like to see more and introduce myself when I have more time.

    Also I'm finding some difficulties with the rhythm pattern of this poem, I would like to think that it is because I'm not native and don't know how to read it:

    I died for beauty--but was scarce (...)

    you see, in this line, the use of the dash would make it a tetrameter or it doesn't count and is a trimeter?

    I'm thankful if you give me your opinions.

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    Tetrameter. Ignore punctuation and just read the words out loud. That means it has four iambs.

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    Thank you, Aramis, it is quite easy once you know it and I can apply that to her other poems too.
    Thanks.

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    The '--' is in the wrong place for a normal caesura - it's within an iamb, instead of between two iambs as is usual, but I agree with Aramis here. I suppose that it makes the reader stress the 'but', turning 'ty--but' into a true iamb instead of a pyrrhic substitution.

    Whatever the whys and wherefors of the metrical structure though, it's certainly tetrameter - di-DUM di-DUM di-DUM di-DUM.

    Besides, stressing the 'but' will stop it getting flabby in later life.

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    Thanks Xamonas.

    And yes, a stressed but is what keeps the world moving!

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