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    on writing

    The hand kept moving

    long after the fire

    learned obedience.

    each line arrived on time.

    the room stayed clean.

    the shape became perfect.

    and

    the spirit waned.

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    I like the economy of this poem, Tony!
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Enjoyed too It's a shame the fire gets tamed and the spirit wanes.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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