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    In a Blink

    It can take years to get things sorted out,
    whatever it is or was that keeps you static.
    Sitting there waiting with only your self doubt,
    while all around you life moves on and you're stuck
    in a slow motion scream.

    We are all moving towards a conclusion,
    it's something that our dance with destiny cannot
    escape. Sure, there you go trying to reconfigure
    life's illusions.
    All I'm trying to do is advise you-
    a problem shared is a problem solved.So look in the mirror
    and tell me what you see - and be honest.

    These Questions we have and
    Answers we want,
    they are like an Ocean.And we just float on the surface,
    fearing that we get drowned.Can I tell you my friend - this life,
    it's flying by in perpetual motion.And what could be -
    can pass you by
    in a blink.

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    "all around you life moves on and you're stuck / in a slow motion scream." Love these lines. I've been stuck, once or twice, and can relate to them. And yes, life moves in a blink. Enjoyed

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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