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    For Thursdays at Two poetry group:

    old wives tale

    Winter still visits Spring; I strove
    to start a fire in the wood stove
    of dank pine and a piece of oak
    giving a flicker of flame and smoke

    so I let it be with a fervent hope
    pondering poetic devices for a poem
    of old wives tales and their scope
    one worthy of adding to my tome

    my black cat joined me in con-
    templation snuggling between
    my legs and I dozed for a time;
    dreams ebbed and flowed -

    hairs pricked up upon my neck
    goosebumps up and down my
    spine; I could see something
    walking over my grave - my
    headstone shining spectrally
    in the starry dim-lit moonless
    night. my cat arched his back
    hissing a direful warning as
    a shade advanced upon us -
    standing my ground with my
    cat twixt my feet still hissing
    enjoining us to flee yet I tarried
    and faced the shade as it began
    its soliloquy: "YOU are the abom-
    ination here, you and your fam-
    iliar who left this mortal coil
    uncounted years ago; what is
    this witchery which brings you
    to my sphere - BEGONE !"

    I awoke
    clammy, but grateful 'twas only
    a dream
    18° C in the room
    where I had reclined
    the wood stove having
    given up on burning
    the dank pine

    now where was I ?

    4/16/2026


    Ta! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
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    7-8-2015

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    This is a richly atmospheric and imaginative poem that moves gracefully between the ordinary and the uncanny. It begins with a grounded, almost domestic scene, the struggle to light a stubborn wood stove, and gently transitions into introspection, drawing the reader into a contemplative mood. Like it

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    Thank you so much!

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Enjoyed the poem, the playful mood, poor Tinky is a good transition element between reality and dream because the myths about black cats.
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Thank you Also the old wives tale of the feeling one gets when someone else supposedly walks over one's grave.

    Ta ! [I](short for tarradiddle)[I],
    tailor
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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