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    The last dodo bird

    The car doesn’t move.
    Time does—
    thin, unhelpful.

    Light holds on the windshield.
    Engines idle.
    A hand lifts in the next car,
    then drops.

    He sits inside this arrangement,
    braided into lanes,

    motionless.

    The car in front moves
    one foot, then two,
    then stops.

    Fifty years, or near enough.
    The numbers have begun.
    The temperature gauge nudges
    to the right.

    Taillights
    stare at him.

    There is no disentanglement.
    It is a progressive
    knotting into.

    A car inches forward.
    Another follows.
    The line closes again
    like water.

    Somewhere ahead,
    something moves,
    or seems to.

    He is the last dodo bird,
    stumbling toward home,
    footsteps—maybe—
    behind him.

    He won’t make it.

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    Sad poem!
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    Interesting images, but not enough for my tired brain... Bad traffic or old car; bad traffic with old car ? Havana traffic ? Gas lines ? Otherwise enjoyed

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
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    Quote Originally Posted by tailor STATELY View Post
    Interesting images, but not enough for my tired brain... Bad traffic or old car; bad traffic with old car ? Havana traffic ? Gas lines ? Otherwise enjoyed

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    Just bad traffic

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