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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    Fine

    And the red wine is fine
    For now,
    I'm not sure anybody
    Really loved me back,
    But it's fine for now
    It will do, it's ok
    It's f ucking fine for now
    And now is all we've got.

    The bottle is corked,
    But it's medicinal
    So that's ok.
    I will feel just fine this morning
    And for the rest of the day.
    The melancholy and me
    Will go away.

    And the red wine is fine for now
    So fine and mellow
    Softening the lines
    Forgetting my demise
    With nicotine and sex
    With a future ex.

    The f ucking wine
    Is f ucking fine
    I'm having a great time .
    For now.

    Life is fine for now
    It's ok
    It's getting easier to leave
    Every day.
    No longer sure I'll even mind
    It's fine.

    No idea what the point was
    It proper had me believing
    Now I know it's pointless
    I'm really fine just leaving.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Melancholy poem, the protagonist mellowing as the corked wine is imbibed. A poem of one waiting for the inevitable. Enjoyed

    Hoping you are well,

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    And the red wine is fine
    For now,
    I'm not sure anybody
    Really loved me back,
    But it's fine for now
    It will do, it's ok
    It's f ucking fine for now
    And now is all we've got.

    The bottle is corked,
    But it's medicinal
    So that's ok.
    I will feel just fine this morning
    And for the rest of the day.
    The melancholy and me
    Will go away.

    And the red wine is fine for now
    So fine and mellow
    Softening the lines
    Forgetting my demise
    With nicotine and sex
    With a future ex.

    The f ucking wine
    Is f ucking fine
    I'm having a great time .
    For now.

    Life is fine for now
    It's ok
    It's getting easier to leave
    Every day.
    No longer sure I'll even mind
    It's fine.

    No idea what the point was
    It proper had me believing
    Now I know it's pointless
    I'm really fine just leaving.
    Really enjoyed this one.

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