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    Forge

    In the forge of sight, a cinder wakes to flame,
    where every edge the mind has hammered true
    dissolves in pressure purer than the blue
    that burns through ash, unclaiming what it names.Each proof I shape returns, a brittle frame
    no logic welds nor reason can renew;
    the Center sifts it, searing to its due—
    a hollow thrust where no distinction reigns.You are the Radius retracting all,
    the Apex eating summit into void,
    a tensile dark no outline can withhold.Belief ascends its arrow to the Call,
    and piercing, finds not summit, but annulled—
    the All-Devouring making Nothing whole.

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    A poem of nihilistic vision in my understanding... perhaps the mind of Sauron working out his machina. Enjoyed

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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