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    Long marriage

    The marriage lasted,
    lilies opening
    year after year
    in a fishbowl vase,
    the water somehow staying clear.

    A man and a woman
    stare straight through each other
    while f ucking

    Above them the angels watch,
    they are perfect, Picasso mouths parting
    as if are singing softly

    The man and woman don’t notice.
    They fade, slowly, willingly,
    moving into each other

    And the angels, at last,
    fold their wings
    and drop toward them

    falling stars.

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    Not a fan of expletives in poetry: Here you paint a bleak carnal union without love that heralds the fallen angels of heaven... a sensual-mindedness that reflects so much of society today - that it endures is at least something.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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    Quote Originally Posted by tailor STATELY View Post
    Not a fan of expletives in poetry: Here you paint a bleak carnal union without love that heralds the fallen angels of heaven... a sensual-mindedness that reflects so much of society today - that it endures is at least something.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    Thanks Taylor

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