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    After a quiet word with the concierge

    As I step down from the chicken fluttered bus
    I’m hit with a blast of popcorn bag heat
    opened directly into my face and I glide through
    the cheek and jowl streets with
    tangled knots of aromas from street market stalls
    I feel life flow back into me(!)

    I grow nearer and remove my aviator shades
    perching them on my head with my left hand while
    my right hand confirms a lump of faded colonial pointed nose men
    aiming towards the bar recommended by the fuzzy diced
    taxi driver with a broken air conditioner and
    I see fleshy tropical shirted gringos appearing uncommonly popular
    at Las Diablo.

    She holds eye contact for 5 glorious seconds
    and slides through perfumed air towards me
    and I rewind to a time of
    cars and lakes and
    cascading hair
    and beery mirth and
    soft touches and the freshly packaged
    newness of youth that the counsel of
    my years will not surrender
    and I become intoxicated by the whole
    damn thing and soon we are

    stumbling into the sharp edge of the city
    through dying light
    past corrugated iron and angry graffiti.
    We are sniped by well aimed stares of
    lost possibilities from women whose
    arms are thick from lifting children.
    Their eyes have no flicker.
    These things cause
    our buzz to fade a little
    and we become less tactile as

    we reach a concrete squared house with a
    sleepy hammock and mongrels and dusty children kicking a ball
    and a grandmother slowly and silently lifts her face
    towards my mumbled greeting
    but her hands continue their soapy toil.

    I find myself in a bare bulb room with a
    picture of Jesus that I remember from childhood Catechism
    on the wall and an old iron post bed with thin sheets and soon
    I see this:

    The symmetry of her face, close up, is melting.
    Her lip curves slightly up on the left side as
    does the right. Matching almond eyes
    with a brow of gentle waves and laughter that
    occasionally breaks into flashes of
    sadness.

    A child is conversing in the
    next room in animated tones playing with
    a (formerly) blonde one armed doll who is
    competing with a tube tv
    broadcasting a Brazilian soap opera.
    A rooster crows, a reggaeton
    car thumps by and the
    street noises converge
    into a disquieting hum.

    We shift from grip to grip to grip as
    a tired oscillating fan moves slowly
    left and right and left, as if
    in disapproval.

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    Enjoyed this vignette... a wonderful use of descriptive language of perambulating through the city prior to a "wrestling match"... enjoyed

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