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    Good Morning

    The sun is already working
    when I step out the door,
    already laying its warm hand
    on the roofs, the palms,
    the backs of tourists drifting
    toward the water with nothing
    to carry but time.

    They move slowly, like people
    who have been forgiven.
    Flip-flops slap the pavement,
    coffee sweats through plastic cups,
    someone laughs too loud
    because no one is listening.

    I walk the other way.

    My shirt sticks before the corner,
    my shoes know this road too well.
    The heat has a memory of me.
    It says, You again?
    I nod and keep going.

    A bus exhales a cloud of sunscreen
    and expectation.
    A woman adjusts her hat
    like the day might bruise her.
    A man points at the water
    as if discovering it.

    I pass them all
    with my head full of quiet things —
    emails not yet written,
    the slow weight of routine,
    motion is blurred

    Work has taught me how to move
    without spectacle,
    how to carry a life
    that doesn’t ask to be admired.

    Still, for a moment,
    I feel the island watching —
    the road, the light, the small mercy
    of a breeze that knows my name.

    Then the office door opens,
    cool air replaces salt,
    and the day becomes what it is:
    just time asking to be endured.

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    Thoughtful poem. "I pass them all / with my head full of quiet things —", "The heat has a memory of me. / It says, You again?" and other observations by your protagonist are wonderful - until the mundanity of office life. Enjoyed

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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    Quote Originally Posted by tailor STATELY View Post
    Thoughtful poem. "I pass them all / with my head full of quiet things —", "The heat has a memory of me. / It says, You again?" and other observations by your protagonist are wonderful - until the mundanity of office life. Enjoyed

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    Thanks Tailor.

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