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    I have got to get out of here

    She took the car,
    the long grey road opening
    like a tongue from the mouth of the house.

    No one chased. No one called.
    The radio whispered—
    fugitive songs for runaway mothers.

    The sky was a fading bruise.
    Miles fell behind her like old letters
    she didn’t want to read.

    She drove through it—
    cornfields stiff as soldiers,
    billboards promising god or sex
    or air-conditioned sleep.

    When the sun lowered,
    she pulled into a motel
    with numbers missing from its sign,
    VACANCY buzzing like a trapped fly.

    Inside—
    thin towels, bedspread like a bad decision,
    and the ice bucket, sweating.

    She drank gin from a paper cup.
    Alone. Finally alone.
    The mirror caught her face sideways—
    a girl who had almost vanished
    beneath wife, beneath mother, beneath woman.

    And the phone didn’t ring.
    And no one knew the room number.

    Floating in the quiet,
    her pulse slowing.

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    Very poignant and sad... "VACANCY buzzing like a trapped fly." - enjoyed your descriptive tone of an escape.

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