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    Leaving

    I watch butterfly on eyes of statue,
    This cemetery is full
    Of shifting interchanging whispers
    About themes for my
    Final dream. Drawn to a rose, I take
    It home and the blood released from
    My finger by rose becomes clear
    In the mirror, first tear perhaps
    Of future incarnation. In final
    Dream I am trapped
    With angel of death
    In wilderness of mirrors whose
    Reflections mime cemetery whispers
    And a dream within this
    One in which I am excavating
    Panopticon of tattooed
    Lightning for wings and searching
    For scaffolding of a sky
    Collapsing as I surrender gravity.
    Ready to sleep I instruct
    Spider to make sure his web
    Is placed for spaces
    For the stars.

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    Enjoyed the images you created... had to look up 'Panopticon' - a curious choice which makes me think I'm missing something.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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    Panopticon..

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    Excellent

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