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    Moving away

    It was meant to be a clean subtraction—
    a one-road village, hedges neat as paper margins,
    the smell of wet hay in the mornings,
    and no one who knew his name.

    The house leaned slightly east,
    as if bracing against a wind that had long since gone.
    He told himself he liked the silence,
    but it was the kind of silence that hears you breathe.

    Days he walked the same field,
    counting fence posts until the sky
    dropped behind the hills like a closing lid.
    He thought distance would be an eraser.

    Instead, his past arrived early—
    in the cracked mirror above the sink,
    in the moth that beat itself senseless
    against the kitchen light, night after night.

    It spoke in his own voice,
    patient, incurious,
    expecting him all along.

    He sat in the narrow kitchen,
    the kettle’s slow boil filling the room.

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    Wonderful poem... Great images

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Quote Originally Posted by tailor STATELY View Post
    Wonderful poem... Great images

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    Thanks Tailor, Ta, short for tarradiddle

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    Enjoyed your poem. You always say much with unpretentious language.
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Quote Originally Posted by Danik 2016 View Post
    Enjoyed your poem. You always say much with unpretentious language.
    Thanks Danik

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