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    Meeting this girl

    Grey mouths open for buses,
    Breath hanging like brief remarks
    The air smells of wet newsprint,
    And the shopfront glass holds nothing yet.

    Hunched shoulders push the morning on,
    Each face its own closed door.
    Shoes slap the pavement’s memory
    Of last night’s rain.
    Even the streetlamps look glad to be off.

    Somewhere ahead, past the shuttered bakery,
    She’ll be waiting.
    I keep my eyes down —
    The trick is not to seem different,
    Though the fact hums under my coat.

    Then I see her,
    Standing in the thin light
    Like the day’s one good idea,
    Scarf loose, hair unbothered by the wind.
    She notices me — the corners of her mouth shift.

    The crowd presses its errands forward,
    Carrying lunch breaks and train times
    And whatever will fill the evening.
    I let them pass on into their day,
    Into the kind of morning they’ll never know.

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    Enjoyed the contrast: girl X people going to work on Monday morning!
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Quote Originally Posted by Danik 2016 View Post
    Enjoyed the contrast: girl X people going to work on Monday morning!
    Thanks. Granted i live in the tropics and not london, maybe next poem will be in a sunny place.

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    Oh, it's cold and cloudy here today!
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Enjoyed

    Warm here... going to be near 100° F (37.8° C) as it has been the previous 2-days and will be a day or two hence.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    Thanks.

    It's warm here
    88°F or 31C
    Precipitation: 0%
    Humidity: 68%
    Wind: 11 mph

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    About 17C here now inside the house. Agreably cold.
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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