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    Wrong turn

    You don’t mean to end up here —
    just a turn too soon,
    distracted by phone

    Boarded windows,
    a bus shelter sagging under last week’s rain,
    plastic bags tangled in fence wire
    like some tired bunting.

    The brickwork blackened,
    rooms full of faded stock,
    waiting for a world that’s moved on.

    A woman smokes by a doorway,
    her face a shade the sun has given up on.

    No point in staring —
    you walk on,
    hands in pockets,
    pretending you belong somewhere else.

    Still, the mind
    takes its snapshots —
    poorly composed,
    unwanted,
    impossible to throw away.

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    The mind as a camera obscura... Enjoyed

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    Thanks Tailor

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