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    Driving in the rain

    It starts just as I’m merging —
    a scatter of soft taps on the windshield
    that quickly agree to become a steady conversation.

    The wipers, summoned from their long repose,
    begin their familiar metronome,
    clearing a narrow stage for my eyes,
    then letting the world slip back again
    into its wet blur.

    Other drivers pass me —
    gray shapes with faint halos,
    as if each car were some minor saint
    on its own private pilgrimage.

    I grip the wheel as if steering mattered,
    as if this stretch of road
    weren’t already written,
    the lines dissolving under a wash of water.

    And though I know
    there’s coffee ahead,
    with someone soft
    a conversation,
    perhaps even sunlight later,
    for now I am content
    to follow these blinking taillights
    through the gray pages of this morning.

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    Wonderful images and language... Enjoyed

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    Thanks Tailor

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