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    motel room, 11:42 pm

    Two girls on the bed
    passing a bottle of cheap wine
    and a thin joint
    somewhere between them.

    I sit by the window
    cracked open
    letting the smoke out
    or maybe letting it in.

    the TV’s been talking to itself for an hour.

    one of them checks her phone,
    the other pulls her hair back,
    they don’t know me,
    not really.

    outside, the neon sputters —
    VACANCY.
    always.

    I think about my father —
    the fists,
    the sour breath,
    the Sunday mornings with nothing to do
    but face the punches

    he would have hated this —
    the girls,
    the bottle,
    the way the world turned out.

    the rent’s due.
    the country’s broke.
    everyone’s a hustler now -
    “do you want to be your own boss?”
    just click here

    they light another joint.
    I watch the smoke
    spin itself thin and vanish.

    we are
    unpaid actors
    in somebody else’s play

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    Loved this: "we are
    unpaid actors
    in somebody else’s play"

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Quote Originally Posted by tailor STATELY View Post
    Loved this: "we are
    unpaid actors
    in somebody else’s play"

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    Thanks Tailor

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