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    Walking dog then coffee afterwards

    Leash in one hand,
    I follow the small philosopher
    nose to the earth,
    while the sky composes
    another blue thought.

    Later, alone with the cup—
    steam rising like
    a second leash,
    this one tethered
    to nothing at all.

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    Love the "small philosopher" attribute to the dog. The poetic parallelism is charming altogether... Enjoyed

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    thanks Tailor

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