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    Afternoon

    I am doing nothing
    at the pool today
    clouds drowsing above

    someone is bombing cities
    someone is screaming in traffic
    someone is stuck in a broken elevator

    I scratch my belly and
    feel the butter warmth of
    the sun on my shoulders

    I am without the noise
    of any language, and away
    from the toil of habit

    I am away from the dotting of i’s
    and the crossing of t’s that have
    become

    each day after day

    I would ask you to stay still
    as if you were absent from yourself
    and you hear me from a distance

    and now be silent, for a while

    breathe in for 3 seconds

    breathe out for 3 seconds

    Keep breathing

    and I will do the same

    I will now close my eyes, and
    lie here with only the sound of
    the bees in the grass

    and you will stay quiet

    and I will do nothing

    and you will understand
    the meaning of my escape.

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    On the road, but not! Danik 2016's Avatar
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    Enjoyed your poem,Tony!
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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