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    That night we arrived in our flat
    With escape in a plastic bag.
    A forgotten fried egg
    With a black yolk
    Welcomed us home.
    Your bleached hair steaming
    From the rain,
    A silvikrin funeral pyre.
    Undressing, we laughed
    At eachothers ribs
    I played Beethoven on yours
    And you played Bach on mine.
    We kissed when both of our
    Lips by chance could meet
    And I felt old
    And over
    And in love
    And done.
    We were already ready.

    I took my phone from my pocket.
    And captured you again.

    You never looked better with a needle in your thigh.
    Of all the photos of you with a needle in your thigh, that's the very best .
    If somehow we could have children
    And our children could have children,
    Then one day our grandchild could look at this photo and say,
    Of all the photos of my granny with a needle in her thigh,
    Thats the very best.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Had to look up "silvikrin" - I see how it fits. "If somehow we could have children" is quite a verse and a kick in the psyche... very well done.

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