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    Garden Visitor

    Garden Visitor

    Do you remember
    when you'd visit me
    in my garden?

    You'd stop at the fence
    take off your hat
    and mop the sweat
    off your brow.

    We would talk
    about the June
    iris as the blue beards
    would bounce about
    your knees.

    I'd invite you through
    the gate to sit next
    to me in my white chairs.

    You'd take my book
    out of my hands
    make a witty remark
    causing me to laugh.

    I'd cut you flowers
    for your husband
    and you'd kiss my
    hand before departing.

    I'd blush watching you
    stride back into the
    world regretting
    my weakness for a
    married man

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    I really like this little gem of yours. There's a charming story in it and it's beautifully written.

    Try to live in harmony with people and nature


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    I'm glad you enjoyed it. That's makes me happy.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Buh4Bee View Post
    I'm glad you enjoyed it. That's makes me happy.
    It's a beautiful and touching story which bewitches me.

    Try to live in harmony with people and nature


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