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    Lightbulb Why become nobody....

    I walk down that path,
    that path with a hint of pine,
    just like in past,
    Past when you were mine.
    Walking along,
    hand in hand,

    It was a moment for,
    Worries to halt,
    Dreams to await.
    because promises….
    were
    all over the place..
    to be at the end,
    end of the aisle,

    So I waited.
    Still I wait..

    I hear your footsteps.
    no, thuds of monsoon.
    I hear your murmurs,
    no, that’s the hailstorm,
    you say “ i love you”
    no, that's the
    hollers of wolves..

    Why become nobody,
    nowhere to be found,

    as the winter,
    without a whisper,
    to leave,
    Leave with the wind.

    now I wonder..
    Have you ever been there,
    or that’s the shadow I share.?

    (This thread was intended to post under Personal Poetry.. I apologise for any inconvenience that might have occurred. Thanks.!)
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    It is interesting that one can feel like "nobody" when they have lost someone. Another bit of evidence that we are not as individualistic as we assume we are. I enjoyed your poem.

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    Sometimes we need to feel nobody to recover our real personality. It happens for example when we walk alone in the evening. We forget for a while our problems, our routine and our past. It is a perception outside time and space.

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