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Why become nobody....
I walk down that path,
that path with a hint of pine,
just like in past,
Past when you were mine.
Walking along,
hand in hand,
It was a moment for,
Worries to halt,
Dreams to await.
because promises….
were
all over the place..
to be at the end,
end of the aisle,
So I waited.
Still I wait..
I hear your footsteps.
no, thuds of monsoon.
I hear your murmurs,
no, that’s the hailstorm,
you say “ i love you”
no, that's the
hollers of wolves..
Why become nobody,
nowhere to be found,
as the winter,
without a whisper,
to leave,
Leave with the wind.
now I wonder..
Have you ever been there,
or that’s the shadow I share.?
(This thread was intended to post under Personal Poetry.. I apologise for any inconvenience that might have occurred. Thanks.!)
Last edited by SNaina; 03-08-2017 at 05:45 AM.
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It is interesting that one can feel like "nobody" when they have lost someone. Another bit of evidence that we are not as individualistic as we assume we are. I enjoyed your poem.
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Sometimes we need to feel nobody to recover our real personality. It happens for example when we walk alone in the evening. We forget for a while our problems, our routine and our past. It is a perception outside time and space.
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