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    externity

    the rise
    and fall of
    eternity
    slowly time
    dissipates and
    logically
    nothing left
    is physically
    but the
    beyond
    the meaning
    of something so long
    quick
    the speed of belong
    is almost never wrong
    and forever is strong
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Nicely paces. It is an eternity between you visits, and pass in an instant.

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    I like the idea of eternity rising and falling and the idea of time dissipating. I hadn't thought of either of those like that before.

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