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    The Broken Spirit

    The Broken Spirit

    Can you not move?
    Can you not speak?
    There are errands to run
    And people to greet.

    I cannot move.
    I cannot speak.
    There's a hole in my chest
    Can you not see?

    I see nothing
    It's all in your head
    Here are your orders
    Get out of bed

    ~How can I communicate
    The sorrows of my soul
    When this passive expression
    Is left untold...
    Here is the question
    I leave for you to read.
    Have you ever lost someone,
    That you thought you'd never need?
    Well this is your chance
    To answer in full
    My life is done
    This gun is cold~

    Why did you go
    I thought you were fine
    Your death is cold
    My eyes were blind.
    You left behind
    This little note.
    Now I can feel
    What you had wrote.

    ~Can you not move?
    Can you not speak?
    Can you now see the words
    That were not there to read?~
    " Can you not move? Can you not speak? Can you now see the words, that were not there to read? "

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    I think that this melancholy suit fits well. The rejoinder of an expressionless mime. His lack of feeling only spurs the ingratiated minds of the living to seek further solace. I like the Imploring plea in this poem.

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