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    A Mixed Bag # 13

    ST SWITHIN AND THE WINCHESTER EGG WOMAN

    An old lady's eggs had been smashed
    On the new stone bridge by workmen
    Swithin picked the broken eggs up and
    They miraculously became whole again

    ON HER CHARIOT DRAWN BY GRIFFINS

    On her chariot drawn by griffins
    The maiden goddess, dispensing justice
    With rod, scales, sword and scourge
    The avenger of crime, Nemesis

    SHARE YOUR KNOWLEDGE AND YOUR WISDOM

    Share your knowledge and your wisdom
    While you’re here because in reality
    Short of committing mass murder
    It's the only way to achieve an immortality

    THERE WAS SOMETHING REMARKABLE

    There was something remarkable
    A special quality beyond belief
    Something dangerous and daring
    With the dark-haired slip of mischief

    IF LIFE IS GETTING YOU DOWN

    If life is getting you down
    And depressing you increasingly
    Take all of your troubles
    And toss them into the sea,
    You don’t have to do it for real
    Just do it metaphorically
    But a trip to the beach
    Will help you miraculously

    OLD

    Old man’s withered fingers,
    On a gnarled arthritic hand,
    Grip the knotted handle
    Of his twisted wooden cane
    And in his leathered face
    Is etched deep the pain
    Of a life lived long
    And his aged countenance
    Each wrinkle tells the tale

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    Fantastic as ever, Biggus. Bravo.

    I especially liked the being free of trouble part. . reminds me of a song by Mazzy Star. .

    "I'm gonna find all your trouble,
    I'm gonna send it away
    I'm gonna make you feel happy,
    I'm gonna be what you say."

    of course, that one is a romantic song and it's possible to be free from trouble anytime--

    the chorus or refrain,

    "It's a clear day out
    It's a clear day out"

    ETC.

    :-)

    And right now as I typed that the rain came roaring down. Just for a moment.

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    Enjoyed "IF LIFE IS GETTING YOU DOWN" the most. The sea and I have been on speaking terms for some time. She doesn't always have the best advice, but she listens well.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
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    The first one makes me think that Humpty Dumpty should have called St Swithin. I also think the one about metaphorically throwing one's troubles into the sea is good advice.

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