thanks you three
Ive finally decided to call it "Simply Joy"
thanks you three
Ive finally decided to call it "Simply Joy"
My mission in life is to make YOU smile
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thanks Momo
My mission in life is to make YOU smile
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not bad as a title methinks
how i hate to like happy poems
dead on the inside, i've got nothing to prove
keep me alive and give me something to lose
night I really loved ur poem. it is beautiful....
I love that line.Tap-danced to a soundless song.
"...You can say anything you want, yessir, but it's the words that sing, they soar and descend.... I bow to them... I love them, I cling to them, I run them down. I bite into them, I melt them down.... I love words so much... The unexpected ones....The ones I wait for greedily or stalk until, suddenly, they drop..." -Pablo Neruda
Another experiment ....
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I sit alone but with myself
Surrounded by a mirror that shows
What I am but not what I want to be.
A shadow of a thought can I see
Within the mirror in eyes --mine.
The thoughts chase their tales
Round and Round within my empty head
A trace of reason perhaps remains
Is this good or bad?
Sanity and reason
Verses insanity and hope.
Knowledge is power and Ignorance Bliss
Insanity is life.
Three fates weave a thread
To this life is tethered
I call this thread insanity.
Insanity is reason.
Reason for to live.
For insanity brings illusion
Illusion being hope
Hope is a Gift.
My mission in life is to make YOU smile
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I really like this part of your poem Night- it is so trueOriginally Posted by Nightshade
(CLAP!!!CLAP!!!)
... That's all for now.
Going round in circles,
Hitting head against the wall.
Not much anything is doing
And my dreams are all too tall.
I would sit in my small corner
Frown at the world go by
But that’s all too much bother,
When I can’t even be arsed to sigh.
Drab melancholic boredom,
Is when the colors all got lost.
Id even contemplate suicide,
If I thought it worth the cost.
Oh the world is so boring
I’m so very, very bored.
Exuberance is tiring.
When was the last time I soared?
My wings are rusting on the wall,
My life light is depleted
My world is hanging in the balance,
Like a toy waiting to be completed
But self pity is most tedious
Not to mention boring and ridiculous
So stretch and run a mile,
Then reach for a book, chocolate and smile!
My mission in life is to make YOU smile
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Being bored is the worst thing ever....
Tried that and it works most of the time.....
I like your poem
Can death kill boredom?
Your poem just "stretched" my mind...to me, very true, and sweet...
There is no polite way
of being happy
It is a nice poem. Keep up the good work Night!
I sang of leaves, of leaves of gold, and leaves of gold there grew.
This one needs a little explaining I think my sister said earlier tonight That I ( me night that is) dont believe in a world without choclate and I thought oh that is a nice line it should be a poem or a song and I havent come up with a good one so I was wondering if other people would like to take a shot at a poem somehow connected to the line a world without chocolate.
but to be fair here i my measly effort
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To me,
the epitome,
of a tragedy,
would be
A world without
chocolate.
A world without laughter
Mad fits of giggles
Spinning round in circles
Kicking up my heels.
Which is why I believe in chocolate.
Chocolate is
A miracle
Not to be ridiculed
It brings joy
On tastes fine wings
I do not believe in suicide
I do not believe gain
On the back of someone’s pain
But most of all
I don’t believe in a world without Chocolate
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A world without chocolate!!! What a nightmare that would be. I shiver at the thought.......
I agree with that 100%
A world without chocolate
what a world that would be
with millions of cocoa beans
living and free
Not roasted then ground
into powdery mush
but hanging quite daintily
on a lively green bush
the babes they would cry
and the women would moan
the men would rejoice
for reclaiming their throne
longtime relationships would no longer shatter
as women stared
and then queried
"Honey, is my *** getting fatter?"
"Why, no dear, its not
now that chocolate is gone.
Its seems 'twas the culprit
of corpulent all along."
And throughout the land
in every hamlet and hood
Red Twizzlers would rise
as the next greatest food
Well I must say thats a good twist on it
a bit shocking to find someone who wants to do away with chocolate but still
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