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    Clipped Wings - Opinions Appreciated

    Hello,

    As the title says but really I wanted to share a poem that I have written. I originally titled it 'Twenty-Six' but then I thought that title might not really be expressive of the poem.

    Mm so here it is:

    Clipped Wings

    In this world of vertical heights, I remain still
    Horizontally detached by my own crumbling will
    My wings once bright like a rising sun
    Plummeted down into a war long won

    Through thick and thin, firm and white
    I soar above the evening sky
    To a land once known to those I loved
    With a courage born from a solitary light

    Under a company of stars by a silver lake
    A memory of youthful wiles deafens the earth
    For a child born on a winter’s night
    Sees not the truth but the past’s mistake

    And so they clip my wings with their tainted hand
    In a world where all must be same
    I bow my head to the deceitful keeper of time
    To the witness in the heavens’ forsaken land

    But when the judges seek what is concealed
    A desire for perfection overcomes grief
    For a mystical performance of blood and tears
    Inspired by their sweetened greed

    Upon my descent the wind blows a feather
    On the throne of the one I called my lover
    Into the palm of his hands he holds my memory
    His one glimpse into my misery


    Thanks!
    M
    Last edited by Angelic Devil; 02-23-2015 at 07:54 AM.

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