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    First time I lost my friends
    The first time I lost my friends it hurts, it hurt a lot.
    I couldn’t take it.
    Crying and regretting,
    Regretting what I did.

    Friends are the most prized possession,
    They know what to do,
    Losing friends hurts.
    It hurts a lot when its your fault.
    My heart sank into deep darkness.

    Mistakes are made and,
    Prices are paid.
    I made one of my biggest mistakes,
    I paid the biggest price ever.


    Pain and mistakes change people.

    My mistake is unforgivable,
    Too hard to give an explanation for.
    Too embarrassed to admit it.
    I lost the best kind of friends by making worst kind of mistake.
    Believe me and keep them good ones.
    Mistakes are made to learn.
    Learn. Don’t repeat after learning

    I learned it the hard way, the bad way
    Now I am paying the price and it’s expensive

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