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    Lightbulb what is a poem?

    in few words please define what a poem is.
    you may use your poetic prowess to express what you think a poem is .


    here is one of mine:
    a poem
    is for reading
    when a story too long
    does not get to the end.
    Last edited by cacian; 11-17-2014 at 06:24 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Poetry is a form that was created
    Even earlier than writing was made.
    Its rhythm and rhyme to poet gave aid
    To remember verses for when dropped
    Or wrong tells poet, he or she, should right
    And trust not memory, even quite bright
    Because oftimes loses itself in other
    Things, especially when she is sexy.
    But the best poetry is just disguised
    Seduction attempt, or undisguised.

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    While I, one time, of this world despaired,
    Like a child bored of its oldest toy,
    Then my hungry mind sought, unprepared,
    For a subtle taste of truer joy,
    And dwelt on sensations so sublime,
    That my pregnant pen was left quite still
    While my soul traversed a sea of time
    And infinite space that charged my will
    With such blinding storms of silent light.
    I knelt naked before the godhood,
    Which to my eyes burnt wondrous bright;
    It flared deep within my very blood,
    And forced to action my lazy art
    To translate the truth I did espy:
    For in that moment we stood apart,
    Then my God was as naked as I.
    "I should only believe in a God that would know how to dance. And when I saw my devil, I found him serious, thorough, profound, solemn: he was the spirit of gravity- through him all things fall. Not by wrath, but by laughter, do we slay. Come, let us slay the spirit of gravity!" - Nietzsche

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    very nice Peter and Loka.
    i enjoyed reading your versions of what a poem is
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Poem is a piece of literature composed of concentrated words maybe rhymed or not rhymed put together to express emotions, feelings,etc..., tackling with either personality affairs or public.
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    A prose essay may be famous
    So, equally, might a poem.
    One is writ by Heaney, Seamus,
    The other by Chomsky, Noam.

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    Some writing where the lines
    Don't go all the way across
    The page.
    ay up

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    Giving one concise definition of poetry is no more possible than giving one concise definition to the word run. We will all keep trying, however, often resorting to poetry itself.

    Poetry is a written and oral art form, whose oral side requires no use of exact tone, as in singing, and whose written side often employs compression of thought into few words and may make use, for effect, of artificial devices such as rhyme, meter, line length and alliteration, among other techniques not consistently found in prose.

    The difference between poetry and prose: A plumber and a mechanic use different tool sets, but some of the tools are the same. These days, too many mechanics are using a plumber's tool set, which is why so many new wrecks will not run. The previous examples in this thread did run quite well, I am glad to say.
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    But, desiresjab, what is the difference in function between prose and poetry? That is where it seems your analogy breaks down.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lykren View Post
    But, desiresjab, what is the difference in function between prose and poetry? That is where it seems your analogy breaks down.
    I don't know. I would have to make another run at that. I can't even really define poetry. It is true the differences I pointed out fall short. Your question of function is the more important aspect and even harder to decide, in my mind.

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    Quote Originally Posted by cacian View Post
    in few words please define what a poem is.
    you may use your poetic prowess to express what you think a poem is .


    here is one of mine:
    a poem
    is for reading
    when a story too long
    does not get to the end.
    I get impatient with some stories as well. Here's my view of poetry after thinking about recent threads discussing Robert Frost.

    Boundless

    Poetry, and even prose,
    Pretends to sleep, but waits for those
    Who’d play the words, unpack the sound,
    Unlock the doors, unchain what’s bound,
    Ride out to where they do not know
    But hope it’s where their hearts would go.

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    YesNo, you just dropped an Entrendre!!! that annotation goes all the way with LOVE...without having to change a thing.

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    What is a Poem?
    Never intensely defined by a poet
    Never expressing the fiend from his pen
    Never releasing the tears to be shed

    Yet it defines the fury as was meant
    letting loose the event that ensued
    wellspring from a place without view
    living beyond the reach of harness

    flexible to lets words be see-through
    buoyancy to grace lines for each mood

    like the rhythms of a Villanelle

    What is a Prose?
    Structure and annotation is what keeps it alive. To express the passion and opinion backing every line. Emotions are let loose on the lines with an intention of keeping you glued to read through. Understanding of the reader is the goal that sometimes cloud the spring of the cause of writing it in the first place.

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    Quote Originally Posted by prendrelemick View Post
    Some writing where the lines
    Don't go all the way across
    The page.
    haha this is fun
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Quote Originally Posted by YesNo View Post
    I get impatient with some stories as well. Here's my view of poetry after thinking about recent threads discussing Robert Frost.

    Boundless

    Poetry, and even prose,
    Pretends to sleep, but waits for those
    Who’d play the words, unpack the sound,
    Unlock the doors, unchain what’s bound,
    Ride out to where they do not know
    But hope it’s where their hearts would go.

    This poem gets an A+ from me, and you know I am a stern grader.

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