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    What do you think this blurb for my book?

    A mysterious portal opens and people are taken in by deformed figures and not return.
    a researcher discovers that these people are dead and taken there could be no human survivors, because the intention is that the man is replaced by a perfect being would exist in place of the human being.
    a group that escaped including this researcher and his son take refuge being hunted by deformed and survive and find a way to destroy the various portals.
    Update : I intend to write more than one book.

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    Some formatting issues stand out such as not capitalizing "A" in the second sentence. In fact, I didn't understand the second sentence, but that could just be me.

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