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    An unknown fairy tale

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    [spoiler]An unknown fairy tale

    Once upon a time there was a prinzess in high tower. The prinzess was the nicest girl in the kingdom of aproz. Her father was king cristal the fourth. When the prinzess was young she liked to go in the forest to watch the animals, but one day came a evil hag who took the little girl with her. She puted the prinzess in a high tower, where she had to wait for help. But there was one problem, the tower had no door and there was dragon. She was looking every day for houres for a door, but there wasn't anyone. She hoped that e prince come to help her, like in Rapunzel. She had read this book a lot because her mother loved this story for her life. Last year she died, because she was 130 years old. So the princess was still in the castle, and no prince was coming. But then she found a way to break out of the tower, because it wasn't built very stable. But where was she? The sky was dark and and everything was frozen. She was lost! She didn't care about where she was, she just wanted to get out of the castle and get back home to her sister, which was already searching for her. She tried to run in all dicections away from the castle but she always kept ending up at the same spot. After a long time of running, she heard a voice coming from under the castle, which didn't seem familiar to her. She knew that the only was out of the castle would be to figure that mystery out. They lifed happily ever after.[/spoiler]

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    Wow! Pretty nice story!
    Show us your other creations, I think the forum members are going to like them :-)
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    The last line about living happily ever after seemed to come a bit too soon in the story. Who lived happily ever after with the princess? Some of the words are spelled wrong. Some phrases seem incorrect such as "in high tower" which should be "in a high tower".

    When I think of fairy tales, I am reminded of Rocky and Bullwinkle's Fractured Fairy Tales which were fairy tales redone in a more humorous manner.

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