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    confidentially pleased cacian's Avatar
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    sliptease

    love and peace
    is like a tease
    one is a crease
    up and down
    ease
    daffodil breeze
    the air is reece
    the other
    please
    slow
    pace
    and cease
    dormant is lease
    neither would brace
    in case they graze
    too harsh a praise.
    opposites glaze.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    It is the best forever poem yet you write Cacian.
    It is very harmonic although I don't know what you meant by (dormant is lease) it has no meaning because I know the only meaning of the word lease is a contract or a property which it is leased for others.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mohammad Ahmad View Post
    It is the best forever poem yet you write Cacian.
    It is very harmonic although I don't know what you meant by (dormant is lease) it has no meaning because I know the only meaning of the word lease is a contract or a property which it is leased for others.
    Mohammad thank you.
    to lease in this context means to let out. It could be release too.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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