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    Violation

    Middle aged people
    will wander around
    battling inner tempests.
    Wondering if the outer
    could just wisp them away.

    In the park, ghosts
    fly high on the tyre swings.
    All I want to do is push
    these spirits away.
    This is the place where I go;

    Back and forth
    Back and forth

    It's the roundabout
    which I so want to ride on.
    It's covered in autumn leaves
    and I laugh alone
    as the trees rustle around me.

    Aging is where I can place
    my hands on my body.
    Feel my own shedding leaves
    and discover the sensuality
    of my decay.

    See Saw Marjorie Daw
    See Saw Marjorie Daw

    There are times though where all
    one does is sit at the bottom.
    In the game one can't rise to the top
    So there isn't any master.

    Words get twisted in the stormy night
    People spill like lattes onto the ground.
    A cloud approaches
    the lid is blown right off
    and then lightening strikes.

    I choked on a purple flower.
    Somebody laughed
    and said I had been violated.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Uses apt playground imagery to experience a "second childhood," not exactly senility but a kind of wistful nostalgia of an adult "teeter- tottering" on the edge of middle-age. One hopes that the playmate on the top doesn't suddenly jump off, making you crash to the ground with a thud. Very painful upon the area euphemistically described as "the business end."
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    Thanks Auntie. I hadn't thought about the second childhood aspect much. It's one of the beauties of poetry. The reader is often more the master than the writer!
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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