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    Life is not like it may usually seems to be
    Look at it through the hollow of the stony gorge
    Life stands alone like an abandoned withered tree

    No birds anymore to chirp or sing a song
    No shadow for a traveler to rest and refresh beneath
    Nothing that which spring had brought for long.

    Only a small footprint left to sorrow for the while
    You never know when this last mark will vanish too
    Aqueous sadness and still bereft of its blessed smile.

    Mystery of Life changes faces with passing time
    What was once blooming spring deadly autumn turns
    Music that Life was loses its melodious chime.
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    When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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    Can anyone tell me how to post a poem with a large gap in the middle of each line. It won't let me do it.
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    If I remember correctly if you highlight your poem and then at the top of the text box click on the thing that looks like <> called Wrap Text, it should keep the spaces of your poem when you post it.

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    Thanks DM. The font is a bit odd but it worked



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    Welsh Heritage 
    
    60 AD.
    Listen! When Caradog    celtic hero
    Born of battle       the Eagle's bane
    From the mainland        crossed the Menai
    Pursued by Legions     closely pressed
    The Ordivices     honour's mirror
    Showed the hero     secret groves 
    Swore friendship     fast binded
    Beneath the oak    Hen Goaeden  
    The mother tree.    of the people.    
    
    Came the Romans     ravening through 
    On the rampage     revenge hearted
    Disdaining         druid rites and runes 
    Splitting boughs       bole and branches
    Boiling messes    with sacred fuel
    
    For seven days     the Ravens watched
    From Clogwyn Coch    on Craiglwyn's flank
    Then descended       to desolation
    There they gathered     the nine acorns  
    A last gift given      by Hen Goaeden  
    O'er the sky-way      wide they winged them    
    Seeding them in     secret hallows                                 
    A boon to the land   wherever they grew.
    
    
    1300 AD
    By Order of the king who everyone feared,
    The Baumaris forest had to be cleared,
    Young Dafydd-the-Axe was a woodcutter's son ,
    He may not've liked it, but it had to be done.
    
    For a Castle's no good with trees by its side,
    There's too many places for foes to hide,
    And a clear field of flight for arrows to fly,
    Can't be achieved with a forest close by.
    
    With a heart feeling heavy he entered the wood,
    And by a great oak he mournfully stood,
    This tree he knew well as his fore-fathers had ,
    Under its branches he'd played as a lad.
    
    Above in the sky the Ravens were wheeling,
    And o'er Craiglwyn, thunder was pealing, 
    He  took up his axe and got ready to swing,
    But stopped and knelt down as storm clouds moved in.
    
    A prayer and a curse welled up in his head,
    The curse, that the king should be cut down instead,
    That rulers hereafter would cherish the trees,
    Prayed Dafydd-the-Axe down on his knees.
    
    There was a flash and a crash as lightening struck down,
    The old tree was rent from the root to the crown,
    Young Dafydd lay still, 'till looking around,
    He saw a small shoot breaking the ground..
    
    He took it away to a place that he knew,
    Where it was safe from the tree felling crew.
    And there it grew cherished by Kings and by folk
    And there ever after 'twas was called Dafydd's oak.
    
    2013 AD
    “As you pass,
    Have a look through the arrow slit on your left.
    The tree you see there was planted in 1838,
    To commemorate the Coronation of Queen Victoria. 
    It was grown from an acorn 
    Taken from “Davy's Oak” a famous ancient tree,
    That used to stand close by and was said to have dated back
    To the time the Castle was built.  
    
    Now, proceed along the passage through the door at the end, 
    Then press number 8 on your Auto-Guide handset.”
    Caradog = Caracticus
    Ordivices = Iron age tribe of Anglesey
    Clogwyn Coch = Red Cliff
    Craiglwyn, = A Welsh Mountain
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    dreamy window

    a window into the wilderness
    looks out
    a lake sufficiently grand
    calms water surrounds icy as the sound
    piercing through the clouds
    and a tree free standing
    autumnal scene
    of an early morning dream
    peaceful
    as the mound enticing the
    hound
    nature sigh
    let the dream flow slow
    to an end of time
    sheer is row
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    No entry from me this time. Pretty short deadline, and I wasn't feeling it as much with this picture. Nothing wrong with it though, that's not what I mean ^^

    Good luck everyone, I see some wonderful poems!
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    Elegy to the Lord's Architect

    Castle stones were hewn with care
    Joints as thin as a maiden's hair.
    Well proportioned slots for high strung missiles
    Precisely aligned with the gardner's sentinels.
    (He was inspired by Versailles' ordered shrubbery)
    The architect acquiesced to the gardner's blubbery.
    It came to pass, the Lord's home was under siege
    The castle fell and so did its liege.
    The Knights fought bravely to the end
    Across the moat their darts they did send.
    But alas they missed their intended mark
    Sinking deep instead into the Royal bark.



    Darkmuse - this is late. If you already made a decision, then no worries.
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    Please DM, hurry up and judge so I can stop tinkering.
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    This was a tough one, a lot of great entrees here.

    YesNo: This poem painted a very vivid picture in my mind. I liked the way it seemed to take me back through time, as well I liked the idea of those of the privileged class being portrayed almost as if they were prisoners. There were times in which I almost wondered if indeed they were in a dungeon looking through the narrow window at taunting freedom that cannot be obtained.

    dara.cv: I really liked your original perception of the picture. I thought your poem had a great concept and there were some wonderful words, and imagery. I loved the metaphorical symbol of the sparrow and the melancholy feel of the poem.

    Pendragon: I really enjoyed the bleak atmosphere of the poem. I think it really captured the fear and sorrow of the time. I could vividly see the image of the people of the town looking at the tree through their windows, wondering if and when they might be next. Quite ominous.

    mazHur: This is a beautiful poem which I believe captures the changing of the seasons. It painted a very vivid picture and really captured a feeling of sorrow, despair, and the bleakness of winter quite well.

    cacian: A very lovely, and serene picture of nature. I thought this poem was very elegantly written and quite picturesque. I enjoyed the very calming feel it gave.

    Gilliatt Gurgle: I enjoyed the images of the past which this poem conjured up, and I liked the playfulness of it. The end made me chuckle. I liked the idea of the role the tree had come to unintentionally play within the battle.

    And the winner is.....

    prendrelemick: I really enjoyed the historical aspect of the poem, and the story that it told and I admired the experimental use of form. This poem had a very nostalgic feeling to it and I really enjoyed seeing the way in which the tree changed throughout time, from the ancient Celts to modern day.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Dark Muse thank you very much and prendrelemick a well deserved win congratulations!!!
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Well done Mick, we bow in your general direction.
    A well thought out, creative piece. I'm curious about the form or approach taken in the first part, is that based on a historic form of that time? Or is the gap in the text your own whim? It seems either column can also be read separate from the other.
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    OK, OK, it was a direct rip off of BEOWOLF ,s format from the sixth century. 4 beats then a cesura or gap then another 4 beats, with plenty of alliteration between the two halves. It is the earliest English written down form I know of.


    I really liked trying it out. The second half I found was usually like a comment or extra info on the first. So it could almost be read without it. Must do some more.
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    Quote Originally Posted by prendrelemick View Post
    OK, OK, it was a direct rip off of BEOWOLF format from the sixth century. 4 beats then a cesura or gap then another 4 beats, with plenty of alliteration between the two halves.

    I really liked trying it out.
    I would personally mention it if I were to use the form of something else, honestly. I don't think it doesn't count because of this, but I would mention it if something does not originally come from you.
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    There's no such thing as an original form anymore - is there?


    My tried and trusted way of posting a pic isn't working at the moment.
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    There you go.
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