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    JB the dark side.

    Here it is the single thread. Towing the line.
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    I will wear a tutu
    if it turns you on
    and dance the dance of the sugar plum fairy
    to be licked from your fingers
    like yesterday's jam.
    Your puppet
    Your Muppet
    With a lazy eye.
    Sleepy knife.
    I will be your killer
    If it turns you on.
    Dressed in black
    dressed to the left.
    Undressed
    I will self harm
    If that's your thing.
    Sleepy knife on
    weakened skin
    if that's your fu cked up thing.
    I will take you to the movies.
    I will be the pill that doesn't kill
    the egg you laid.
    I will be the celebrity
    that didn't sponsor anything.
    I will self destruct like a f ucked up
    Russian rocket to the moon.
    I will be your spoon
    whilst you f uck the fork.
    Like a would be earthquake
    I will leave a crack.
    Ripped at the edges
    frayed,
    unspotlit,
    like this quiet
    bastard birth.
    Last edited by Jerrybaldy; 10-04-2013 at 07:48 PM.

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    #2
    When she told me
    She had a job on the ghost train
    I had no idea she would end up screwing
    The frankly fit bloke
    Who played the skeleton
    Riding the bicycle.
    I remember the night
    I bought
    him a hotdog in the rain,
    I thought he was a c unt
    back then.
    Last edited by Jerrybaldy; 10-05-2013 at 03:11 AM.

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    There is no answer to five across
    six letters
    Second letter G
    There are no answers
    PermanentlY.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
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    There is no answer to five across
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    Second letter G
    There are no answers
    PermanentlY.
    C'est vrai.

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    Another virtual prize. Love your raw art.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    JB, I simply lurv your dark side! I read the first offering quite unprepared (well, except for the title, but how could I know I'd encounter such raw beauty?), and it felt like I was hit in the stomach. I can only say i'm impressed, and to show it, I simply bump up this thread without further ado, okay?
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    #4
    Licking wet gloss lips
    as she fingers the tulip glass
    as the candlelight flickers
    on white linen.
    Licking her lips
    as she fingers
    as candlelight flickers
    on linen.
    Licking her fingers
    as she fingers her lips
    her soft skin slips
    upon linen.
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    A powerful opener! There's probably a lot more to it then I can fathom. But what I got out of it, WOW.

    #2 I can tell it's from you with my eyes closed

    #3 shows your genius in traveling seamlessly between two worlds, the sensual & raunchy to the philosophical.

    #4 is just delicious! Tulip glass... oh dear, so tempting. *clink*

    "But do you really, seriously, Major Scobie," Dr. Sykes asked, "believe in hell?"
    "Oh, yes, I do."
    "In flames and torment?"
    "Perhaps not quite that. They tell us it may be a permanent sense of loss."
    "That sort of hell wouldn't worry me," Fellowes said.
    "Perhaps you've never lost anything of importance," Scobie said.

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    Thank you Delta, Dieter and Haunted. Good to get comments from the best .
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    #5 Unrecorded Ripples.

    Tomorrows world is today,
    mildly disappointed here.
    Still have to open doors with handles.
    No pills for lunch,
    only for sadness.
    I wear a suit to work
    that isn't silver.
    My hovercar is not floating outside
    just a Volkswagen.
    People still have nasal hair
    and warts.
    They have the internet to abuse
    and bully and flirt,
    to imitate life
    In solo.
    People keep chickens
    and grow vegetables
    to keep it real.
    Like people kept budgies
    that talked.
    People still have sex
    but Christ it's confusing,
    are two enough?
    Tomorrow today
    has empty churches
    and heaving mosques.
    Terrorists for Nazis.
    Jesus still nailed to his cross.
    Parents pissed on wine
    Children only play on PlayStation
    Music died with the pubs
    and any freedom to enjoy the thrill
    of f ucking yourself up
    in a socially acceptable way.
    Kids see labia before their first kiss.
    Nobody goes out
    unless it's sponsored
    or two for one.
    Twats still demolish bus shelters
    In 2013.
    Buses still take people to work.
    But they cannot smoke upstairs.
    Head to the coast.
    The sea remains the same.
    You can walk right in dressed in your suit
    flood your patent shoes
    soak your Best Dad socks.
    Watch the moon in widescreen.
    Walk toward it.
    Swim for a while
    backstroke creating white foam
    in black sea.
    Gasp the air, let it go
    and sink
    in unrecorded ripples.
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    #6

    Today is the tomorrow you worried about yesterday
    And all is fine.

    Yesterday was the day you worried about
    the day before.

    Sorry to disturb you today.
    Tomorrow is worrying.
    Frankly I am pissing my pants.

    Don't even mention next Tuesday.

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    Publish FFS! You do the Northern hemisphere and I'll do the Southern....
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Deal Delta.

    My thanks also to the wise young lady of litnut. AUNTIE SHECKY. This place owes you much. X

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    The pier.

    Pink sugar spun to floss
    sending a warm sweet scent
    curling between amusement machines
    of cherries and bells
    and tunes that play
    in the smokey chattering heat
    of the pier at night.

    Beneath, rusted columns
    sink to black water.

    Fat spits from a burger on a hot plate,
    outside, by the wide mouthed clown
    collecting wooden balls
    for winners of a fluffy
    personified carrot.

    A boy looks over the rail
    wondering how deep.

    A man in a cap blows smoke
    from both nostrils
    through a moustache that once was dark
    and had led Mary to call him Valentino.
    He pushes his glasses back up his nose
    and aims his smoke at the moon.

    The boy sees the moon dance
    from wave to wave.

    Gypsy Lea is waiting behind a red velvet curtain.
    A woman with a polystyrene cup of tea,
    cooling beneath a washing line
    of coloured bulbs,
    wonders whether to dare go in.

    "Legs eleven"
    the bingo caller shouts in static.
    Old moustache man whistles
    into a westerly wind.

    The woman with the polystyrene cup
    blows steam toward a couple holding hands,
    who are wishing romantically upon the moon
    that dances from dark wave to dark wave
    for the boy leaning on the rail.

    The couple orbit each other
    In a mock waltz.

    They will return in twenty years
    to where they met.
    Moustache man will be dead,
    Mary still remembers her Valentino.
    The clown still laughing
    it's belly full of wooden balls.
    Gypsy Lea foretold her own end.
    The lady who never went in,
    walks on the prom,
    with alzheimer's and
    a tall grey stranger.


    Pink candy, sweet, still fills the air.

    The boy is a man
    and as the tune of three bells
    fills the pier
    and the painted bulbs
    sway in a westerly wind,
    he stares
    transfixed still,
    by the cold black lure of the sea.
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    Oh JB! What a wonderful setting and a great passage of time to wander through. The only thing I wanted to munch on along the journey was chips in newspaper with plenty of salt n vinegar...
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